ความคิดเห็นที่ 1 เข้ามาอ่าน และมาเก็บตัวอย่าง ของพี่เนี้ยๆๆ แระ ไป เขียน ส่งที่ฝึกงานอิอิ ข้าน้อยขออนุญาต ได้ก่อจ้าวววว ถ้าได้จะขอบคุณเป็นอย่างมว๊ากกกก อิอิ รอผู้เชี่ยวชาญมาแนะนำด้วยคน ^___^ จากคุณ : เด็กโง่ คนเดิม (SnowHeart) เขียนเมื่อ : 23 ธ.ค. 55 00:14:07

ความคิดเห็นที่ 2 OBJECTIVE To obtain a position where I can use my language skills, work experience and knowledge of golf management. PERSONAL INFORMATION: Age: 27         Marital Status: Single Nationality: Thai           Religion: Buddhism Interest: Reading, Golf, Internet EDUCATION Master of Business Administration  (GolfManagement)                     Ramkhamhaeng University 2010 – 2012                             Bachelor of Business Administration (Political Science)                     Ramkhamhaeng University 2005 – 2008 WORK EXPERIENCE The Best Golf Organizer Ltd.     Jul 2011-Oct 2011                 - Office: Create and execute designs such as brochures, advertising papers, trophy labels and plates, and photo slide for presentation - Event: Manage golfer’s registration/scorecards/stage and stereo system         Phramongkutklao hospital      Apr 2005–Jun 2011 - Pharmacist Assistant Record medication data from online prescriptions Answer queries on supply and availability of medicines Any tasks assigned by pharmacists ADDITIONAL SKILLS   Proficient in Microsoft Office Ver 2007-2010 Fair in Adobe Photoshop                         Good English communication skills                 Basic communication in Japanese (on-going learning)                         ขอสอบถามเพิ่มเติมผมไม่แน่ใจว่า แขวงและเขตใน กทม เราต้องใส่ sub district และ district ด้วยมั้ยครับ ขอความกรุณาด้วยครับ ขอบคุณครับ No need. Just write: Klongtoey, Bangkok. Be careful about punctuation. Nationality : Thai = Nationality: Thai Note: I delete something that is not really useful. It shows inexperience about writing resume. Write only things that are pertaining to the job, nothing else. จากคุณ : K.Senior เขียนเมื่อ : 23 ธ.ค. 55 02:11:22

ความคิดเห็นที่ 3 Try looking at what others are writing. Throw "resume golf manager" at Google. This is one of those 13,000,000 hits..     http://www.trimountainrealestate.com/Craig_Belcher_Resume.htm Browse around and see if you can make use of anything that looks interesting: style, sentence structure, layout, choice of words, etc. แก้ไขเมื่อ 23 ธ.ค. 55 08:53:55 จากคุณ : MissingInAction (MissingInAction) เขียนเมื่อ : 23 ธ.ค. 55 08:53:03

ความคิดเห็นที่ 4 Back to your original resume. I am going to be a bit mean; hope you can take criticism well. :-) ----------------------------------------------------------------------- OBJECTIVE : To obtain a position where I can use my language skills, work experience and knowledge of golf management for the joy and satisfaction of golfers >> Looks ok but you should mention "golf management" first as this is a high mark. PERSONAL INFORMATION: Age : 27 years old        Marital Status :Single Nationality : Thai          Religion : Buddhism >> Employers care the least about this. Single, Double (joke), Married, black, yellow, Islam, or Hindu doesn't mean much -- as long as you can work for them. (There might be an age discrimination in Thailand. But 27 is no problem. Interest : Reading, Golf, Internet >> Should say things about golf at a deeper level. Project a picture of an avid golf person. >> Reading is assumed. Do not mention it. If you don't read, then you will get into trouble soon in your career. >> Internet thing is assumed. Do not mention it either. No value. EDUCATION : Master of Business Administration  (GolfManagement)                     Ramkhamhaeng University 2010 – 2012         >>>> Spell out a bit on what you have studied. "Golf Management" sounds terse. Done any IS? Papers? Workshops? Project?                     Bachelor of Business Administration (Political Science)                     Ramkhamhaeng University 2005 – 2008 WORKEXPERIENCE :        The Best Golf Organizer Ltd.     Jul2011 -Oct2011                 - In Office : create and execute design in all print such as brochures, advertising papers,Trophy labels and plates and photo slide for presentation - In Event : administering for golfer’s registration/scorecards/stage and stereo system run smoothly >> Too short. You need to elaborate more. This is where you make an impact!          Phramongkutklao hospital      Apr2005 – jun2011 - Pharmacist Assistant : recording medication data from online prescriptions accurately         answering queries on supply and availability of medicines and any other general tasks as instructed by Pharmacists >> Ok.. since it's not related to "golf". ADDITIONAL SKILLS   Able to use Microsoft Office 2007-2010, internet efficiently Able to use Adobe Photoshop fairly                         >> don't say fairly. Advanced communication in English language >> Got any proof: TOEIC score?                 Basic communication in Japanese language (in learning process) >> Any cert? Yank in-learning-process. It looks weird.                         Friendly, Enthusiastic, Excellent comprehension and retention >> Proof? Any work-related award? Got great KPI from annual performance review? and Responsible    (worked while studied in Bachelor’s Degree) >> This is good!! But you should say it in the Education Section with something like.. Financed 70% of education through part-time work and summer employment. Worked 30 hours per week on average while able to maintain reasonable grade levels. จากคุณ : MissingInAction (MissingInAction) เขียนเมื่อ : 23 ธ.ค. 55 09:25:56

ความคิดเห็นที่ 5 Revise and post back. And remember:     Good artists borrow. Great artists steal.                                   -- Picasso จากคุณ : MissingInAction (MissingInAction) เขียนเมื่อ : 23 ธ.ค. 55 09:31:39

ความคิดเห็นที่ 6 ได้ครับ คุณ snowheart จะเอาไปเป็นตัวอย่าง จะคัดลอก จะอะไรก็ได้ครับ เอาไปใช้อย่างเข้าใจแระกันครับ and thank you Khun K.Senior for your help and your advice and Khun MissingInAction. I appreciate for what you have been doing for me. You remind me of my adviser when I did IS, I've Never forgotten. I've edited my resume and waiting for your and K.Senior's comment thank you again, both of you จากคุณ : wispom เขียนเมื่อ : 23 ธ.ค. 55 21:50:24

ความคิดเห็นที่ 7 OBJECTIVE To obtain a position where I can use knowledge of golf  management, work experience and my language skills SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATION Knowledge of golf industry and golf tourism with M.B.A golf management Experienced organizer in golf charity events with client preferences Ability to multi-task under pressure Ability to work independently or as part of a team Strong passion for challenging golf course and eager to inform other people EDUCATION Master of Business Administration (Golf Management) Ramkhamhaeng University 2010 – 2012     Extra-Curricular Activities - RU MBA GOLF2 CHARITY GOLF EVENT (in Windsor park & golf club 2011) welcoming the golfers and guide them to registration department - RU CHAMPIONSHIP THAILAND 4th ( in Cascata golf club 2011) observed activity and learn to establish an event   Bachelor of Business Administration (Political Science) Ramkhamhaeng University 2005 – 2008 I worked while studied, tuition payment without parents’ aid and yet finished my Bachelor degree in 3 year WORK EXPERIENCE The Best Golf Organizer Ltd. Jul2011 – Oct2011 - Office : Create and execute designs such as brochures, advertising papers, Trophy labels and plates according to client preferences              Manage offering products concept, logo with client and suppliers              Follow up orders which can deliver to client on time - Event : Manage golfer’s registration/scorecards/stage and stereo system             Collaborated with photographers to selected golfers’ photograph for sell Phramongkutklao hospital Apr2005 – jun2011 - Pharmacist Assistant : Record medication data from online prescriptions                                   Answer queries on supply and availability of medicines                                    Any tasks assigned by Pharmacists ADDITIONAL SKILLS Proficient in Microsoft Office VER 2007-2010, internet Moderate in Adobe Photoshop Good English communication skills (Certificate of Proficientcy  A.U.A language center)  (Should I test TOEIC exam if I don't have the score) Basic communication in Japanese (on-going learning) (don't have any cert. I've been learning by my self) Enthusiastic, Excellent comprehension and retention (learn how to use Photoshop and other programs to produce all kind of printed works by my self) PS. almost forgot. I did my IS but the subject was nothing about golf tourism ( It's แรงจูงใจและการพัฒนาฝีมือของนักกอล์ฟสมัครเล่น) Should I put it in to resume. What do you think?                 แก้ไขเมื่อ 24 ธ.ค. 55 19:47:22 แก้ไขเมื่อ 23 ธ.ค. 55 22:07:21 แก้ไขเมื่อ 23 ธ.ค. 55 22:01:05 จากคุณ : wispom เขียนเมื่อ : 23 ธ.ค. 55 21:52:24